This is a response to the d’Verse poetry prompt ‘Octelle’
It’s not a perfect example, but I had fun doing it, and I thank Grace very much for posting.
Grey skies meld into purple light
Mottled, marbled but piercing bright
The edges move, stir and shift,
Illuminate rain that banks and drifts
Coursing, creating living souls
Growth of plants, creatures, life, and mould
Grey skies meld into purple light
Mottled, marbled but piercing bright
Thanks for reading!
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Very lovely, Gill – this flows very smoothly off my tongue 🙂
Much love,
David
Thanks David. Appreciate it.
I enjoyed what I see as the intention of the sky and there is good symbolism there.
Thank you. Appreciate your comment. Thank you for contributing.
You’re very welcome and my pleasure.
I enjoyed the gorgeous imagery, blending of colours and movement in the poem.
Thank you. It’s wonderful when someone reads something you write and gets it. Thank you.
Thanks Mish. It was a fun prompt and poem.
So happy to read that you had fun with this form. Love this line: Mottled, marbled but piercing bright. Happy weekend!
Thank you so much, Grace, I’m glad you enjoyed and thanks for contributing.
Thanks Grace. I had fun.